Ich habe mich links und rechts für Mechatroniker Ausbildung beworben, aber ehrlich gesagt bewerbe ich mich für fast jeden Job, den ich sehe. Trotzdem werde ich entweder abgelehnt oder schaffe es nicht einmal über die ATS. Ich habe das Gefühl, dass mit meinem Lebenslauf etwas nicht stimmt. Sollte ich es vollständig ändern oder gibt es bestimmte Dinge, die ich beheben sollte? Alle Tipps wären sehr hilfreich.
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Are there IT recruiters who offer services such as reviewing resumes?
I saw 3 different comments on CV posts that could be useful idk if they’ll work tho
1- German companies require a photo on CVs
2- „•“ these make it seem less professional
3- Don’t explain your experience too long. They said they don’t read them. So maybe explain them in bullet points.
Other than that rejections are completely ok in 2025. Too many people get rejected from 200 jobs until they find the one that accepts them. My sister got rejected by lower paying jobs and got accepted by a higher paying one. You should keep applying.
Too many black „Schmierereien“.
First of all, fix the spelling mistakes. There are some in the first paragraph for example: Montage und Wartung are both nouns. In the last paragraph: Eigenbau … gebrauchten (…?). There is a whole word missing.
Edit: I found more: Burger King with space between the words and in so many places there are no spaces between the commas. It seems that you didn’t read it thoroughly yourself.
I also think that these Minijobs are described in too many details.
* you don’t specify the levels of your skills. The most important question any company will have is: how is your German
* you list a lot of irrelevant details (like who cares how many Pfandflaschen you handled). If the Probearbeiten was less than 2 weeks leave it out
* a few typos, e.g. „Eigenbau aus gebrauchten“, there’s a word missing
How well do do you speak German? I think it’s crucial for them to know that you can speak German well.
There are several spelling mistakes, it makes you look lazy.
„Erfindungen“ seems weird to be included in a CV for a simple Ausbildung or Job.
Also your Abitur-Note, that it was the 15th in town, gives super weird vibes. It’s nothing one would include normally, especially as there were like 14 ppl better than you. It leaves out where you did your Abitur, makes me feel like you did it somewhere else and not Germany (Baccalaureat?). Which might have people worry that you cannot speak German well, see point 1.
Löten does have nothing to do with C++ and bash, it sounds like you just listed whatever came to your head.
First problem I see is the spelling. And you were apparently god’s gift to Kaufland and Burger King, which I totally believe. Also Germans tend to know where Kassel is, there is only one city by that name. Your education line tells me nothing. And apparently, you’ve built a 2-stroke engine out of used???
„I apply to almost every job I see“. I think that probably why.
You claim to have a lot of experience in many different things, which is actually a good thing. On the other hand, you have almost no practical experience in jobs that require the skills you have mentioned.
Try to focus on something that you are really want to do. If you want to be mechatronics apprentice, try focus on that. Ask for a „Praktikum“ and put those into your Lebenslauf. Experience is key here. If you can proof your skills, some will maybe offer you the „Ausbildungsplatz“ you want.
I’m surprised no one has mentioned anything about the CV format yet.
You CV should be in a tabular form and limited to just one page, or 2 incase of multiple jobs with only relevant information.
Your CV is too wordy and no one would read through all that.
Dude this looks like a wanabe CV for high educated students in their Master programm…
I think most company take this one seriously.
You are appling for a three year training wich is ment for people who finished 9th/10th grade. 15-18 years old…
Its very very obviosly translated or AI written.
The previous jobs is filled with rubbish details. Your are writting about your fucking Kaufland job as it would have been a manager position 😀
It should be more like: „I worked at Kaufland for X months and did general logistic“
80% less text should be a goal for applications like this.
A short list of schools you have visited
A short list of previous jobs with short explanation of task. The less relevant it is for you ausbildung the shorter it should be. For the Kaufland and BK ones Logistics and Kitchen& chashier might be enough.
List of Hobbys/extra Skills like your programming 3D printing and two stroke engine.
I am also wondering if you know all this stuff why do you want a training position? And if you dont really know all that stuff why are you telling so?
If they want to know the details about your job and stuff they will ask you in the interview
* CV is not in German Standard Format
* Photograph is missing
* your education needs to be on there, you also need to add a copy of your high school diploma and not mention the grade on the CV. Mentioning grades is only done for university degrees
* your high school diploma ideally needs to be translated and notarized because it’s not from a German school
* Probearbeiten isn’t worth mentioning unless it was an internship of several weeks or months
* nobody cares about what you did in detail in unskilled jobs like cashier or warehouse worker
* is that project a thing you did as a hobby? Not really relevant. You might mention in your letter of motivation that you did that and it sparked your interest in the field or something like that
* list of skills is all over the place, especially since you make it seem you already know all of these things on a professional level while you are an unskilled worker who neither has Ausbildung nor a degree. Even if you have these skills from somewhere, in Germany you only count as skilled worker after Ausbildung or finishing a degree plus having at least some 2-3 years of work experience after finishing your Ausbildung or degree
Too many spelling errors, bad grammar and way too detailed in some parts