Als jeder Schüler bin ich mit vielen Erwartungen und Traum hierher gekommen. Aber jetzt scheint alles nur zu verblassen. Ich bin gerade dabei, meinen Abschluss in 5 Monaten abzuschließen. Kein arbeitender Student, kein Angestellter stellvertretender Job, der nur seit 2,5 Jahren als Fahrer arbeitet. Menschen mit schlechtem Deutsch als ich bekommen mehr Jobs. Wie? Ich habe B1 Deutsch. Ich bin sehr gut in Gesprächen. Nur mein technisches Deutsch ist schlecht. Hat nur ein Interview mit Audi in deutschem Problem technischen Wörtern gemacht. Irgendwelche Tipps? Oder sollte ich nur meinen Glauben oder mein Schicksal akzeptieren und in mein Heimatland zurückkehren. Alle Tipps, welche Fähigkeiten ich lernen soll, würde geschätzt 👍
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Von Empty-Tea-9011
15 Kommentare
Keep trying.
Its an english cv. Do you send a german one for german job descriptions?
Hello mate, i would say maybe also highlight some soft skills that you have from previous employment and emphasis those a bit more as only seeing it mentioned in the 4th bullet point of the top job.
What kind of jobs are you searching for specifically and are you also sending cover letters?
You don’t want to hear it but it’s probably the german. It really limits you in this job market. 😔 keep trying and while you are waiting maybe take a B2 intensive?
2 points from me:
1- don’t use dots to measure your experience.
2- translate the cv in German.
Well, learn the technical language. There is no other way. If you know that is your weakness, then that’s what you need to work on. Also, translate your CV to German.
Three things come to mind when I look at your cv:
– the design looks like you used a template and isn’t very appealing
– your work experience doesn’t tell me what exactly you did. For example “created annual reports”: what exactly were your tasks? Did you gather the data, did you calculate anything?
– the focus of your studies is described in a very broad manner. Don’t just list all the subjects you had
Try to answer what problem you solved and how, that should help.
Best of luck!
For my personal preference its a bit loaded.
It just seem like a lot of text. Maybe shorteb your technical skulls a bit and shorten your work experience and specialise it for the exact application at any given time
Ok, first and biggest red flag — it is in English. Come one, use deepl, translate it into german, let somebody, even your teacher, check it out and you will have way better chances.
Avoid long sentences and KISS (keep it… you know). What does „deepened understanding…“ mean? Make it bullet points: CNC, … , drilling, milling. Setup, operation and maintenance of cooling towers and compressors.
And don‘t forget, the current situation is far from brilliant.
You should check if your CV is ATS compatible. You can use LaTeX CV templates which would make it look more professional. This one looks a bit fancy, use simpler CVs.
You masters focus sounds highly unfocused… Apart from that not to bad. What kind of work you are looking for?
I did not read a single word and did decide I don’t want to look at this, and now think about a recruiter that gets hundreds of these each week. It looks like every other cv. Maybe you can work on it to be unique
I remember a similar post a few months ago and one of the top comments was not to use these scales with dots.
Put professional experience before Education. As much companies value experience more than Education. And please get rid of the point system for language and technical skills. 4 of 5 points for Excel doesn’t make any sense.
„Just my technical German is bad.“
Isn’t that what you will need more?