Hallo zusammen! Ich habe alle Ihre Kommentare gelesen und sie haben mir sehr dabei geholfen, meinen Lebenslauf zu präzisieren. Dies ist die aktualisierte Version.
Nochmals etwas Kontext:
Ich lebe derzeit in Mainz und bewerbe mich für Stellen als Data Engineer in ganz Deutschland. Ich bin vor Kurzem mit der Chancenkarte hierher gezogen und habe Anspruch auf eine Vollzeitbeschäftigung.
Ich verfüge über 5 Jahre Erfahrung im Aufbau von Cloud-Datenplattformen mit Tools wie Databricks, Spark, Kafka, Terraform, Airflow usw. Der Großteil meines Hintergrunds liegt in der Cloud (AWS, Azure, GCP) und ich habe sowohl an Streaming- als auch an Batch-Pipelines gearbeitet.
Ich würde mich über jedes Feedback freuen, damit ich es weiter verbessern kann. Dank im Voraus!
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Von Luxo_Goicochea
8 Kommentare
1 page and no summary, for starters
Summary out, smaller spacing, one page, no one is cares about percentages/numbers in jobs
BTW: with a Chancenkarte you are not eligible to work full-time but only 20hrs/week.
You’ll probably struggle to get a Senior position in Germany, so just prepare yourself for that.
As someone else said, try and make it just one page.
Try and avoid unverifiable percentages.
Limit your tech stack to the languages you actually know, and not just wrote „Hello World“ in. It appears rather bloated at the moment.
Lastly, under the Chancenkarte you can only work part-time. Once you receive a job offer you will have to convert to a visa which includes full workers rights.
Can the mods just ban these type of posts? There’s been almost daily a ‚CV review post‘ this week and there’s plenty of subs more suitable for that, such as r/germany_jobs
Remove the summary. You can also remove the details from older jobs to save some space because you most likely have the skills listed in the Tech Stack anyway. A lot of times people only list details of what they did in that position under only the last job they had.
If you managed to automate „infrastructure“ (whatever It means. Like infra for what?) and achieved more than %50 percent automation on infrastructure somehow, you should have been manager / director somehow.
You seem to be job hopper with some experiences are less than 6 months. This is red flag in Germany (probably everywhere)
You CV does not mention any output and focus on actions rather than outputs / results
Delete the summary.
In general, a two-page CV is ok if you have enough relevant experience to fill more than a page, but with so little on the second page (and the big spaces between lines on the first page), i would re-format. Also the two-column style is not really a thing here.
Play with the formating, either to get it all on one page, or get a bit more „meat“ on the second page as well.
– You have two experiences of 3 and 6 months. If they were internships they should be labelled as such (I am not sure how it works in your field about contract lenght).
– Bullet points shoukd be proportional to the duration of that experience.
– Birth date not needed.
– Education can go to the column on the left.
– There is too much space between the lines.