Suchen Sie nach Ratschlägen zur Verbesserung meines Lebenslaufs, da ich nur Anrufe von Personalvermittlern und keine Direktangebote bekomme. Ich ziele auf Rollen in der Unternehmensfinanzierung (wie M & A) oder Management Accounting. Einige sagen, dass es zu lang ist, obwohl ich es bereits abgeschnitten habe und einige mehr irrelevante Linien entfernen könnten. Ich habe vor, den Sprachbereich auf Deutsch zu schreiben.
Scheint etwas zu vage oder zu wechseln, abgesehen davon? Würde irgendwelche Erkenntnisse sehr schätzen 😉
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Von Maleficent_Tip2032
7 Kommentare
Make it shorter. No more than two pages. Especially for short term internships.
Two lines about a task of checking if a new product is in the right tax group? That’s a little excessive.
Your work experience should have „beruflicher Werdegang“ or something along those lines as a headline. Definitely not „Ausbildung“.
Use „Ausbildung“ as a headline for your education section.
There’s some awkward language in that section as well.
Your skills section mixes languages.
I See you censored your number 😀
Hoteladministrator?
Weird title for a reservation groups sales agent.
Also, training for what tasks?
As someone from the hotel industry that section raises some (minor) red flags to me
Also, are you including Zeugnisse?
>corporate finance (like M&A)
I don’t see the expected qualifications/ experience for a corporate finance role.
Sorry.
You have not even 1 year of accounting work experience, and not even 3 months full-time in your current position, and already looking to swap. I suggest you stay with your current company for a few years, and then your CV will look more interesting for accounting. Corporate Finance M&A is looking a bit out of your current range.
Do you have any plans to do any professional exams? Are you applying for entry-level/trainee jobs? The course in Landshut isn’t really clear to me – did you get a degree/certificate?
More generally: I think you could make better use of the white space to shorten the document by a lot. If you have no need for a work permit, put it in the personal details section. If you want to mention the ski instructor certification, I’d put it in an interests section and format it like ‚Skiing (certified ski instructor), Travel, Languages‘, or whatever your interests are.
You only separate your names with a „,“ if you go by „Nachname, Vorname“. If you want to go „Vorname Nachname“ then you can also just write „Name:“