Don’t use GPA plus a german grade. That is guaranteed to confuse people because GPA usually refers to foreign grading systems
thewindinthewillows on
When you apply to jobs in Germany, there is no need for „Berlin, Germany“. We know where Berlin is.
You should mention *which* „international leadership program“ you are talking about. Otherwise, that just means nothing.
The „Work Experience“ section is over-long. I bet you could condense each part to half the length without losing anything actually relevant. It looks as if you were attempting to pad out everything. Too many adjectives that say nothing. „Thoughtful customer service“ – what does that even mean? „Building relationships“ with fishermen?
PureQuatsch on
I’d put work experience before education. If I see education first I tend to think they’re students with little work experience.
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Don’t use GPA plus a german grade. That is guaranteed to confuse people because GPA usually refers to foreign grading systems
When you apply to jobs in Germany, there is no need for „Berlin, Germany“. We know where Berlin is.
You should mention *which* „international leadership program“ you are talking about. Otherwise, that just means nothing.
The „Work Experience“ section is over-long. I bet you could condense each part to half the length without losing anything actually relevant. It looks as if you were attempting to pad out everything. Too many adjectives that say nothing. „Thoughtful customer service“ – what does that even mean? „Building relationships“ with fishermen?
I’d put work experience before education. If I see education first I tend to think they’re students with little work experience.