Keine positiven Antworten auf über 30 Bewerbungen für Junior-Stellen im Bereich Data Science/ML auf LinkedIn. Stimmt etwas mit meinem Lebenslauf nicht? :(

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1. It is an American format
2. Lack of business fluent German 
3. Too long
4. The formatting

If you use the search function you’ll realise that there is an oversupply of recent grads at the moment. 

In general you rarely use a summary statement in Germany but if you want make it an actual readable sentence.

Well I hope for you that that is your German grade (then you would just put 1.7 not 1.7/4.0)

Why are courses still ongoing but you have finished your masters? Why is the end date of your master thesis after you have completed your degree?
Things like that just look sloppy and like you don’t actually care of the way your present yourself.

Only list 2-3 most important courses and not all modules you took.

There are some very wobbly phrases you included:
– Deutschland Stipendium (drop scholarship as Stipendium= scholarship)
– merit scholarship: what branches??? Drop the unnecessary explanation

Did you do your master thesis at uni or externally?

Work experience:
You have more to say about your 3 month work student position then your 2 yearl long full-time employment?

To summarise: it’s a bit too long, not every little piece needs to be highlighted or explained in detail (e.g. Philflow or details of what you did in all the different projects), mistakes in grammar or sentence structure

As you are non-EU include your visa situation.

As recruiters only spend a few minutes on each CV, you would need to „sell“ your experience early.

I will mention a few feedback:

* Your „summary“ and „education“ sections are not specific enough. You need to tell recruiters your key skills in these sections. Mention Generative AI, Diffusion Model, GAN, or LLM if you want to sell them. Saying something like „passionate about ML“ or „Excited about using AI“ is not good enough, as everybody is doing this.
* focus on your impact in each section. For example, how does your Master Thesis help the research community (or at least your supervisor)? Only saying that you „develop something“, „integrate something“, or „training something to generate geometries“ are not helpful enough. Everybody who gets this task will do this.