Zunächst einmal vielen Dank an alle, die mir geholfen haben und mir die besten Ratschläge gegeben haben! Ich habe mir Notizen gemacht und folgendes geliefert:
- Viele von Ihnen haben vorgeschlagen, dass ich meinen Lebenslauf auf nur einer Seite verfassen sollte.
- Einige von Ihnen haben vorgeschlagen, Latex zum Erstellen meines Lebenslaufs zu verwenden, und um meinen Lebenslauf auf nur einer Seite zu gestalten, würde ich sagen, dass dies die beste Option war!
- Ich habe die SMART-Methode nach besten Kräften genutzt, um meine Erfahrungen aufzuschreiben
- Ich weiß, dass ich meinen Lebenslauf für deutsche Anzeigen auf Deutsch verfassen sollte, das habe ich auch auf Deutsch gemacht.
- Ich werde meinen Lebenslauf für jede Stelle separat ändern.
Irgendwelche neuen Gedanken zu meinem neuen Look? was denken Sie?
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Von Alone-Session-68
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>I know that i should make my resume in German for German ads, I made the same in German.
Why not post the German one then?
Sorry but have to tell you, this 1 to receive would immediately finish in trash bin. 1st design, 2nd catastrophic font and unnecessary infos. Who cares how many pieces of rice did you counted for example.
I don’t want to put you down, but you must rework this stuff from scratch
Azizam, this CV will directly land in trash bin at least by our company.
Programming: Python?
Work-student in Iran has almost no meaning… also the font & design is catastrophic
Az AI komak begir 🙂
One page is good but it looks very full. I don’t think you’ll necessarily need projects or further details on university etc. on your CV. On mine I usually just wrote „200X – 200Y, school name, degree“, it is mostly to see with one glance if there are gaps at any point during your life that you aren’t adressing for some reason
Editing to add: you also don’t need to list your certifications and qualifications in this much detail on your CV. If they are really relevant for some reason, just state you have them and attach the certificate itself to you application. Try to stick to one line per point, else it looks fluffed and employers are most often unwilling to read a wall of text when they expect a small list of bullet points about your life.
First: add your working experience in reverse chronological order.
Second: what are you even looking for? Your most recent experiences are in a lab, you have an ongoing AI-related project and you list an ongoing Coursera certification on SAP Signavio. Like, I have no idea what kind of job your profile is even targeting.
Third: the layout, in all senses, from font to information organization, is just terrible.
Dates on the right makes understanding the timeline harder for the reader.
Also: too many words…and some unnecessary information is also in there.
Doesn’t the TU have a careers service to advice students. This just doesn’t look like a German CV. Subtract anything that is not relevant to your role. Remove the italic locations and the reference to Persian.
Change font, and it’s too busy. Needs to be easier to understand at a glance
Edit: DM’d you feedback
Way to clutered and too many words.
If recommend adjusting your CV for every job you apply to.
One wants SAP? Be very ealaborate ob itand be shorter on Ai etc
This CV would make the average german MILDLY annoyed with a possible frown.:
– horrible font
– not much logic behind the presentation, dates, order of things
– technical skills are all over the place
– lots of redundant or unnecessary info
I’m so out of touch with Germany’s style CV.
I genuinely think the font and the layout is ok,
apart from the content that might be improved.
In fact, if you google „ats latex resume template“, this is what exactly it’s going to look like.
Ask yourself: can anyone get a clear idea about all your relevant skills by skimming over this CV for about 5 secs? If not: it will most likely end up in a garbage bin pretty quickly. The idea about making it 1 page is not to try and fit all the information that was previously on two pages, but to reduce the information load by at least 50%. Nobody needs to know how many experiments you did working as a student helper in a lab.
Why is the format US letter? Makes my head hurt pls make it A4
And generally there is too much going on. I don’t even want to read it. The font makes it even worse.
For experience, put the most recent one on top and put the other ones below it in chronological order (most recent to oldest) the dates in your CV are all over the place.
Also, limit the description to unrelated experiences to one or two sentences. There’s generally too many words, it sounds like AI generated fluff.
Move the dates from the right side to the same side as everything else. After removing the fluff you should have enough space to do so. If you want to insist on keeping it on the right side, make sure none of the other text “crosses” the dates area. It should be like a box with only dates and places. I’m not sure how I can explain it in text but, like for example in your first “experience” the text “product design and” is right underneath “Rasht, Iran”. It’s too close. There should not be description text there. It makes it look confusing and busy.
Change your CV layout to a european/german one
Then go somewhere else